@HannahRae99 haha no problem! Your fan fic is really good! Keep writing! I would give you some tips but as you can see, im not a very good writer. All i have to say is that you should develop hailee and jalieeans charachters more.
Would you do me the honor of checking out my ff? It's my first and I'm really curious as to what people other than my friends think. Thank you in advanced!