xKingFrogx

Alternate Ending link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-C58FV1Ixx4kg3xe8gy8lsVlP93LJ32waa4d115N5bc/edit?usp=sharing 
          	PDF: file:///C:/Users/nosle/Downloads/The%20Palace%20Guard%20Alternate%20Ending%20(1).pdf
          	
          	Also, I posted a link to a website on my profile, this will allow you to rate my work and ask questions that I will try to answer to the best of my ability

scripturedbones

@xKingFrogx I think the original ending was better written, but I would've liked to see Setial go back in a cold emotionless rage to cut off the king and his brother's heads. Then either commit suicide or die of old age after a boring life and meet Nikkol again in the afterlife of their religion.
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babassJane

@PaulynPhiri1 how can I asses the alternate ending of the palace guard because I tried using the link but I couldn't find it
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Supervcookie

@xKingFrogx thank you
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sln_eee

still can't accept the ending of The Bars Between

Damage_Mind06

Dude same I’m actually so depressed about it! I don’t know Ryion couldn’t just end up with Adren because now he’s going to be miserable the rest of his life with a family he hates and a life he hates and Ryion is going to suffer alone and hating his life! I need a better ending because that one is unacceptable!
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eha_09

@sln_eee us
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Playlist_542

sameee
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Eroticjonaxx

So sorry for bumping your profile but can you check out this story and give me your reviews on it if you don't mind. Please delete if you feel not appropriate. Thanks and sorry for the inconveniences.
          
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