Jamie

Please updated Wild One - Werewolf Novel

You are written some of the amazing stories keep it up.try to be little detailed about them next time

Can you plz tell your other account name?
          

I almost lost you lol. Since you changed your username

Just started reason Fates Why Me
          
          Chapter 1 was good. 
          2 things you could tweak to improve it so far: 
          
          Nature reflecting her emotions when she was rejected was good, but too heavy handed. 
          
          When she bit her Mom, Mom would have been instantly angry, not appologetic. They would have screamed at each other, she would have blamed her Mom for being rejected by her mate... Her Mom could have crumbled and appologised then- far too late. 
          
          When her Mom is attacked by her most quiet and submissive kid, seemingly unprovoked, she would NOT have gone straight into appology mode. Not after ignoring/abusing her so long. It creates dissonance in the mind of the reader and (briefly) pulls us out of the flow of the story. 

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