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Ooh, and I do plan on reading Locked Away soon, also seems like a good plot. When I read all of the chapters you've posted, I'll put my opinions and or suggestions here. :)

Hello, so I just read your story Wake of the Dead, and I have a few suggestions. For starters, their grouping seems to come a bit quick. Dylan also confessed a bit too much for just meeting Dean.
          
          And I'm not trying to be rude, and am really sorry if I offended you, but I just thought I'd put my opinion.
          
          But I really love this plot, and can't wait for another chapter. You don't have to change anything if you don't want to, it's already great. :)

Hi Brandy - thanks so much for adding my story, The Realms to one of your reading lists. I appreciate it. I hope you enjoy reading it.  :)