Hi, first of all, i love your name. Reference to the Godfather? Anthony Corleone right? or is that actually your name? if so sorry :) coinkydink :)
i literally just found your story. i hope i'm not too late. i actually really liked the concept and the idea. i'm honestly a huge godfather fan and i'm writing a story myself but it's completely different to yours :)
i think you should continue with it, and maybe develop it and give more detail
i for one will definately read it :)
Good Luck, i hope you achieved your dream by the way :)
Mkimi
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