xPeezy

@Mkimi18 Hey i really appreciate the comment. The truth is i havnt given this story much though since i begun it back in September of 2010. But honestly your comment made me want to pick it back up again. As for my name, it isnt Corleone, but it is an Italian last name. I hope to be able to read an some of your book soon. And i will give this story another shot. Thanks again
          	
          	Anthony C.

xPeezy

@Mkimi18 Hey i really appreciate the comment. The truth is i havnt given this story much though since i begun it back in September of 2010. But honestly your comment made me want to pick it back up again. As for my name, it isnt Corleone, but it is an Italian last name. I hope to be able to read an some of your book soon. And i will give this story another shot. Thanks again
          
          Anthony C.

Mkimi18

Hi, first of all, i love your name. Reference to the Godfather? Anthony Corleone right? or is that actually your name? if so sorry :) coinkydink :)
          i literally just found your story. i hope i'm not too late. i actually really liked the concept and the idea. i'm honestly a huge godfather fan and i'm writing a story myself but it's completely different to yours :)
          i think you should continue with it, and maybe develop it and give more detail
          
          i for one will definately read it :)
          Good Luck, i hope you achieved your dream by the way :)
          Mkimi
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