xRedRose

Hey! I was wondering if you could take a look at my poetry? Some sincere feedback would be very helpful. Thanks a bunch! :]

Hi, how’s it going? Welcome to Wattpad !!!
          
          I uploaded Chapters 6 and 7 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. Your feedback is important to me. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favor for your works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  
          Here’s the link to my story chapters- 
          http://www.wattpad.com/535720-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          http://www.wattpad.com/535804-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right
          

HI...i hope that you could read my story and poems on “love and hate” and "silent love" read other poems if u have the time.
          please comment, fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks.
          PLS READ THE POEM ON” SILENT LOVE”…comment
          I had just posted poems on 'mourning to the silent call',’because of you’ and ’don’t leave me’ check it out and comment..thanks

Don't worry. Since I just started today so I still need to get myself acquainted with his website. Shortly after I get settled in with this new experience I'll gladly go to your pages and read/comment/vote on them.

Ur poems... they're beautiful.... the first one, for only a moment.... how should I describe it.... it was just mind blowing..... i loved it soooo much...... *ur fan*

heyy can u read some of my poems....... it would mean a lott to me.... thanks.... :)

Can you please read my poem Royal Skys? or one of my other pieces of work? please?! Feel free to comment, vote and fan?

You have talent.
          Keep writing:]