Hey I just read your book! It’s really well written and light hearted! I’m not sure where you plan to go with the theme and tone of the book, but I would be careful to stay close to the personalities of each character. That’s something I struggle with a lot. I think you’re doing a great job though! Imagery is extremely powerful in fanfics so if you ever feel like a chapter is lacking, see if you can amp up the imagery and see how you feel. Also, if you feel a chapter isn’t what you want then don’t post it. It’s better to wait and make it how you want it instead of posting on a “deadline,” I’ve gotten myself into those situations and they’re not fun lol. Other than that I think you’re doing great! Keep up the good work and I can’t wait to see your next chapter! ❤️