xTinaStories

I'm on my way to finish my second chapter! :D I'll post it anytime soon! :D Read it, sweeties.

Mirokou27

Good eve xTinaStories :) 
          First of all I would like to say thank you for giving me the opportunity to critic your work. :) 
          Ok, your story is good for me. But it is somewhat common in wattpad :) I suggest to add a twist on your story. Yung makakarelate yung mga reader :) I also suggest na lagyan mo sya ng gulat factor, kung baga unexpected yung scenario. So Ayun lng :) All in all 7 out of 10 sya :) Thank you and more power :)

xTinaStories

@Mirokou27 Hello there. Thank you so much for your critique. :D As in nagulat ako. Haha. And yes, this is an absolute reminder for me. Thank you. The story is still on-going and yes, magbibigay po ako ng mga pasabog :D  I hope you'll read my coming chapters :) and hope magcritique ka uli. Thank you!
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