I really liked how detailed your story was! It really was a page turner. It kept me interested and it really gave me an idea of what everyone was like. You might want to reword some things. Like the ending, "josiah and I'm here for you"
I kind of want to put up a story i'm working on. It's called Hush Hush. It's kind of a werewolf story. What do you guys think? Please let me know. c: <3
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Saw you already put it up, not sure if it's finished, as I havent read it but I saw only 2 chapters, put on more! Im sure its amazingm