holly :)

hi there,
          
          I’m a new romance writer to Wattpad. Could you please checkout my work & leave your thoughts? 
          
          Thank you in advance

Please check out my book please
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/330519824?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Odufa143&wp_originator=VMtp%2B4X4sMrHhYsqEjzjGI8k8OWHM6Urjgt45hIUCNVNIz%2BzsPDll7XdvlTW0ospfP4uSMBhlD1hpjMrnovDjdarx2s%2F9FGEFddz%2BZS43OXwi3c1R6P4%2Fd3ZEkwilnIF

Hey guys just want to promote my new and upcoming book it’s called “Novah” it’s a Caribbean based book filled w Jamaican Dialect and Standard Jamaican English. Give it a read and let me know what you think xxxx <3
          The link is below 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/283097173?utm_source=ios&utm_content=share_writing&utm_medium=sms&wp_page=create_story_details

Perdón el spam. https://www.wattpad.com/story/307190976-aquel-verano?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks

Plzzz update Drop Dead Gorgeous  I need moreeee 

Please update the book Kiss The Cook. I am dying to know what happens further.

It's been such a long time since, I had a good cry over a book. And 'Till Death Do Us Apart' was everything, I have been looking I'm a book for quite a time. I love the plot, I love the character and how you've build up things and the tempo of it. It's really an amazing book.❤️
          Thanks for sharing such good work with us.
          It truly is one of a kind book. :)
          I hope you have share more amazing works of yours with us.❤️
          
          Love, Dhirasha.

Uhm hello Holly (I presume) I read ur works dirty little secrets and drop dead gorgeous. And I must say they are amazing the plot, the storyline, the characters, the mystery, the buildup and almost everything was on point. One thing what I did not like was the epilogue of DLS It was kind of sloppy and did not really give the impression of an epilogue. If u reconsider it, read it and u being the author u know better u can rewrite it better to ur judgment (just my POV no offense) after reading ur stories I felt like so less votes for this amazing work wow this is so underrated. I hope n wish that ur work reaches out to a large crowd and they appreciate it as well. 
                 I'll give a small advise please update it at least once in a month or something (not pressurising u cuz ik how certain people can annoy the heck outta the authors to update) cuz if u don't update it every once in a while you'll lose ur readers. (Trust me it's happened with me a lotta times) gotta keep people hooked up to your work oh and one more thing every once in a while in the story throw hints on the murderer (they can be wrong hints too as in u can subtly point out at Zach in one part and point at Mrs Stryker in another) that way it'll totally dishevel the readers minds they keep wondering who exactly did it and that'll keep them more hooked up. Oh and Camila reminds me of Alison from pretty little liars. I mean the storyline is somewhat parallel though the ideology is different.....argh I'm blabbering u might not evn want to read so much. 
          
          
          PS Thank you for the amazing work. It was awesome please consider whatever I said. (Constructive criticism)

Update your superhero story!

Hey just finished reading Dirty Little Secrets. I cried in the end though. Love your works. Are you going to continue Drop Dead Gorgeous any soon??