SaphiraDarkly
Very very intriguing, I believe your book could prosper if you change the title to something less than long and add a lot more to your story. I enjoy vampires a great deal , amongst many other creatures. I hope you will carry-on with your book, it says much without saying a lot (because it is more easy for teens to understand), but I enjoy details, >^..^<%u2026%u2026%u2026VvvV....I wish you much luck and blessings along your journey.