xXcuriosityXx

@PyriniaHesione lol well thanks, glad you liked it. You actually reminded me that I had to change it
          	

PyriniaHesione

@xXcuriosityXx but this one is nice, too 
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drawmyescape

thanks so much for my first comment! im writing the next chapter of Edge of Touch now. Any improvements you could suggest about the first two chapters

xXcuriosityXx

I cannot! They're utter perfection, but that comment may be a little bias because I am in love with the story already, lol! But honestly, nothing, your grammar is fine, spelling is fine, it looks like you have an editor (do you??) all in all its a great story and I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^o^
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