xXeatmewhileimhotXx

seriouslyy,,
          	should i continue Crushing Hearts and Crushing Minds
          	and
          	Dancing with my own Devil??
          	
          	no one seems to like them:/

Twitchy_Phreak

Hey, if you had the time would you mind reading 'Darkness in the Sun' and tell me what you think? Would be super awesomenss.
          Here's a part from it, If it grabs your interest then please feel free to do what was described above.
          "Their roars of hunger were deafening with their numbers, seeming to hit us in waves of sound. The stench seemed to make the air solid, and tasted horrible in my mouth.
           Rich’s excited shouting and cursing could vaguely be heard over the roar as they closed in. They met Guy, Steve, and Rich in a wall of hungry mouths and outstretched arms, hands bent with seeking, twitching fingers."

fallawaybroken

Ahh!! Lucky! You get to see a7x xP. I wanted to see them on the 29th, but I didn't have a ride there :(
          
          and, if you made her a zombie, she could be like a special case. Like she's half immune? So she still has a conscience but is still a zomblie...it could kinda be an internal struggle. but another survivor would probably work better. you could do chapters in the POV's of like 3 or 4 survivors and alternate until they find each other...idk. hahahahahahah
          
          and I'm glad you liked start screaming :D and very happy that you became a fan....thanks! <3 

watermelonsushi

hey! lol i really like your name :) i think its awesome :) anyways, i was wondering if you could check out my story License to Steal...Your Heart? it would really mean a lot to me if you could :) thanks for your time,
          -Watermelonsushi :)
          ps. i like your background pic :)

fallawaybroken

haha np, and thanks for reading my story as well :) haha. 
          
          I actually think if you wanted you could extend pulled from the grave... either by continuing from her point of view as a zombie or  making it another survivor's POV...idk. i just really like it xP

fallawaybroken

Hey! I read your story Pulled From the Grave and I don't see why you haven't shared anything before, you are a fantastic writer :)
          
          Please message me when you put more stuff up! And I just want to know, are you writing more of Pulled From the Grave or is that the end??
          
          
          Anyways, if you wanted to in a spare moment, it would be really awesome if you could check out my story "StaRt ScREaMinG" and let me know what you think? You definitely don't have to (obviously) and I understand if you don't, but it'd mean a lot if you did :)
          
          
          BUT! I love you're writing style, it's so fantastic and easy to read. It paints a picture and I wouldn't be surprised if you get published some day :)