xXquieteyesXx

@AquilaAltaira I do have an idea for you: a girl is stuck in a pattern of instantly gratifying behaviors, looking to them for happiness even though that happiness never lasts. All she wants is to be happy but she can't seem o stay happy...she knows she needs to make to changes, but every time she tries, she gives up or gets shot down. She feels she may be destined to a world of pain eternally but isn't ready to give up. 
          	Think you can write about this???

xXquieteyesXx

@AquilaAltaira I do have an idea for you: a girl is stuck in a pattern of instantly gratifying behaviors, looking to them for happiness even though that happiness never lasts. All she wants is to be happy but she can't seem o stay happy...she knows she needs to make to changes, but every time she tries, she gives up or gets shot down. She feels she may be destined to a world of pain eternally but isn't ready to give up. 
          Think you can write about this???

xXquieteyesXx

I read it, and you know what? There is no poem that is better than another, only different. Different people have different writing styles and each writer harbors different styles within them. How the piece comes out depends on mood, level of distraction, topic, etc. I don't think you could ever write a "bad" poem. Certain people just have an ear for writing, there are people that couldn't write a poem to save their lives. We are not one of them.