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So um...here's a bit of the beginning of the next chapter. Hope you like it! 
          	
          	I know I hate Storm's dream world..you will too.
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          	I stumbled down the rocky slope in fear; in fear of something dangerous.
          	
          	The darkness enveloped me, its grip encompassing the world that I strode along. It was as if my paws skidded above the ground, of which crumbled below. 
          	
          	Something did not feel right about this place. 
          	
          	Coming to a brief halt at the base of the spiraling slope, I peered ahead. Shadows crawled up and down, left and right, churning like the malevolent ripples along the distant ocean. Their figures were so distinct, unreal shapes clashing within each other, all the same syrupy value of the dark potential they held.
          	
          	My own shadow was nonexistent in this time vortex I tread. It was somewhere off, back in the dimension I knew and treasured. Here there was nothing to slake the fear of the unknown, nothing to compensate for the satisfying and satisfied voices of those I traveled beside in Ailos. These thoughts all trailed back to the loss of Falco.
          	
          	I myself was not keen enough to piece together where I was. No mortal being would have been able to realize the domain in which I took the first step into. 
          	
          	So unaware I was of what lie here.

zaffreflare

@xXxNovaxXx I think that is a smart idea. If you aren't completely finished the chapter, you can still get feedback. It also provides some idea of what will take place. You are very welcome! :)
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@jadewolf334 I happened to forget about this again. ;-;  I've definitely started updating it again, thank goodness. I was wondering if you thought it was a good idea to post snippets of parts occasionally without revealing too much until the chapter is truly finished? And thanks for the feedback, I really, really appreciate it.
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zaffreflare

@xXxNovaxXx Oh my gosh... I just happened to find this today and I am stunned. No kidding, this is one of the best things I've ever read. Awesome vocabulary: check. Super mysterious: check. Full of foreshadowing: check! I was actually looking to see if you'd been working on more Dark Haven, and I guess this is the answer! I hope you will decide to post this chapter soon! ;)
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So um...here's a bit of the beginning of the next chapter. Hope you like it! 
          
          I know I hate Storm's dream world..you will too.
          --
          I stumbled down the rocky slope in fear; in fear of something dangerous.
          
          The darkness enveloped me, its grip encompassing the world that I strode along. It was as if my paws skidded above the ground, of which crumbled below. 
          
          Something did not feel right about this place. 
          
          Coming to a brief halt at the base of the spiraling slope, I peered ahead. Shadows crawled up and down, left and right, churning like the malevolent ripples along the distant ocean. Their figures were so distinct, unreal shapes clashing within each other, all the same syrupy value of the dark potential they held.
          
          My own shadow was nonexistent in this time vortex I tread. It was somewhere off, back in the dimension I knew and treasured. Here there was nothing to slake the fear of the unknown, nothing to compensate for the satisfying and satisfied voices of those I traveled beside in Ailos. These thoughts all trailed back to the loss of Falco.
          
          I myself was not keen enough to piece together where I was. No mortal being would have been able to realize the domain in which I took the first step into. 
          
          So unaware I was of what lie here.

zaffreflare

@xXxNovaxXx I think that is a smart idea. If you aren't completely finished the chapter, you can still get feedback. It also provides some idea of what will take place. You are very welcome! :)
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xXxNovaxXx

@jadewolf334 I happened to forget about this again. ;-;  I've definitely started updating it again, thank goodness. I was wondering if you thought it was a good idea to post snippets of parts occasionally without revealing too much until the chapter is truly finished? And thanks for the feedback, I really, really appreciate it.
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zaffreflare

@xXxNovaxXx Oh my gosh... I just happened to find this today and I am stunned. No kidding, this is one of the best things I've ever read. Awesome vocabulary: check. Super mysterious: check. Full of foreshadowing: check! I was actually looking to see if you'd been working on more Dark Haven, and I guess this is the answer! I hope you will decide to post this chapter soon! ;)
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And forget that. I was bored of even trying the Infinite Story again. I managed to get out of this hiatus I was in due to writers block and somehow wrote a thousand words without thinking it was too awful. Yay! So I'm 1/3 through Chapter 11. Another reason I didn't work on it was because I was unsure of how to set up these next chapters, and ended up settling on something COMPLETELY different than what I'd originally planned. Anyways, I'll just have to see where it goes from now on.

xXxNovaxXx

Since I just finished Chapter 10, I'll be spending time on another story for quite some time to shake up my mind and be ready to resume working on Dark Haven again. Just wanted to give a heads-up and don't worry, my other story will be good too. I'm either going to revive The Infinite Story or something..

xXxNovaxXx

Let's be honest here..I'm on a roll! Chapter 10 is done! I have nothing else to say except to please suggest words for the Guide of the Ancient Language..
          
          Two chapters in nine days...o-O

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I see where you're going...and I like it. I'll definitely consider <:
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zaffreflare

@xXxNovaxXx 0.o 
            Maybe for the Ancient Language Guide you could write a little teaser (like something that foreshadows)  and readers would have to figure out what it meant! Of course you wouldn't want to give too much away...
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Yes! I did Chapter 9 in only four days! I'm proud of it, too, which is good. Read over everything and hopefully corrected all the mistakes. I think I'm getting better since I first started the story, and that makes me happy. Starting Chapter 10, which will be officially a third of the whole story! I already have plenty of twists and adventures planned out for the future, and I'm glad to finally get Storm working on his Safe Haven. It's only where the excitement begins..
          I'm still looking for suggestions for words on the Guide of the Ancient Language, so if you have any requests please turn them in now because I still have none! I'm aware again that it's not Saturday, but I can post whenever I want at this rate of speed on my writing. xD Have a great day!

xXxNovaxXx

Sorry for not updating yesterday! I hadn't had internet access on Friday and Saturday, so for one I didn't finish and two I couldn't get on Wattpad. Luckily I just whipped up the rest of Chapter 8 today and published it, so enjoy! I'm holding back on the Guide to the Ancient Language, sorry. I might start working on it again, though.

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I'd actually like requests for words on the guide so that I know exactly what to do so it'd be less mind-numbing. About 50 words would be great. ;) Unless you want a sentence, then do a sentence which would count for five words, (even if longer or shorter)
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zaffreflare

Question ( that has nothing to do with anything): 
          Could you possibly write something for your "About" on your profile? I don't know anything about you besides 1.) you're an awesome writer 2.) you like fantasy and 3.) um... you like wolves? I don't need to know about your personal life or anything, it's just that I sort of am at a loss for knowing some things about you. Does that make any sense at all? Well, whatever. Hopefully you'll decide to listen to my advice :P 
          (If you can call it advice...)

xXxNovaxXx

@jadewolf334 Me too, Jade.  ;3 It is, I love to confuse everybody with it's name,  too.
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zaffreflare

@jadewolf334 It's awesome, thanks for writing about yourself! I absolutely agree on how it's pretty annoying that wolves are so popular. I feel like people think they're just about packs, alphas and mates. It's sooooo frustrating to me. 
            Wow, I've never heard of a "bugg" before, but out sounds like an adorable mix! :3 Anyway, I'm glad to know more about you, Nova! (Is it okay to call you that now? Hopefully, because I like using nicknames...) ;P
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@jadewolf334 I didn't nail it, but I think I did okay. xD I'm kind of glad you asked, to be honest.
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Hello people of the world! I'm glad to say that I finished Chapter 7 yesterday and am now working on the next chapter.  2500 of the words in Chapter 7 were made solely on Wednesday and Friday, the rest (the 500 words or less were done before the 2500, in the beginning) sloppily pieced together beforehand. I changed up the quote once more because I felt that you deserved a little 'spoiler'...anyways, Tempest's sort of secret revealed in Chapter 7 will be hectic in the later chapters. Falco changed the subject because he knew that dwelling on it would get them nowhere. However, if he hadn't of cared, he could've sat asking her questions for years, which would be a quite boring story, so no way!
          
           I went to this craft fair earlier today and got some young cacti, apple cinnamon jam, and cute little pineapple pin cushions today! I know, random subject, just wanted to share that. 
          
          Don't you think that saying Falco's 'whole' story would be revealed next chapter is kind of suspicious?