@ea_carter Nice to meet you too! Just finished the book, its so complex! I haven't read a good wattpad book in so long, so thank you for this book. :) My only tips would be to have a glossary of terms used in that chapter at the end of that chapter. Also, I struggled to remember all the characters and where they had been mentioned before or who they were so maybe you could have a summary of who each character mentioned after the first few chapters? Well done for all the research you did, it really did come through in the book.