xafeur

The new version of The Betrayed's chapter 2 is out!

xafeur

Hey everyone, I'm in the process of rewriting the description, prologue and some old chapters of The Betrayed story so the next chapter may take some time before being completed. This is to make the story more coherent and not to have different writing styles mixed up.

TheDarkEmperor

Are you still continuing betrayed? Also do plan on making a 40k story in the future?

xafeur

@TheDarkEmperor I know don't worry it's getting prepared ;)
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TheDarkEmperor

@xafeur like the lore is/could be the same but the all the Primarchs and the Emperor are female. 
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TheDarkEmperor

@xafeur there is cool art of Genderbend Primarchs! Like really cool art.
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xafeur

I'm extremely happy to announce the new chapter of The Betrayed story is out. It is my longest chapter ever, I've put all my love in it. I truly hope it will be worth your wait! (Tomorrow I make the interlude chapter)

jonathan125833

How are things going?
          
          (Just wondering, thats all)

jonathan125833

@xafeur you definitely write more than I do cause I stop at three thousand words, sometimes. 
            
            But also take you time writing it!
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xafeur

@jonathan125833 Well I started the new chapter a week ago but, with my family, we worked a little to clean and made some improvements in my room and the walls so I had no way to write. Now, I can though! Though the chapter is at 3000 words right now and it's far from finished (it will certainly be the biggest chapter I'll ever make).
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jonathan125833

Just a random question. Have you ever watch TTS? (For being more specific, "If the emperor have a Text-To-Speech-device.")

jonathan125833

@xafeur I thats quite an interesting idea! I’ve had the idea where Totally-Sane-Person (my profile character) remove bits of his soul to create a character and the book the character is written in. 
            
            So basically my character will technically be removing pieces of his soul to create other characters of the books he is writing.
            
            But again, this is quite the interesting thinking.
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xafeur

@jonathan125833 I'm gonna share with you a little thing here. The Betrayed book is going to be part of my little Warhammer fantasy universe. Other books with other characters and we already know one secondary character who is going to be the main character of another book.
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jonathan125833

@xafeur I can agree with you there!
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