xafeur

The new version of The Betrayed's chapter 2 is out!

Orionbateman19

@xafeur what's your name on archove???
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xafeur

Hey everyone, I'm in the process of rewriting the description, prologue and some old chapters of The Betrayed story so the next chapter may take some time before being completed. This is to make the story more coherent and not to have different writing styles mixed up.

TheDarkEmperor

Are you still continuing betrayed? Also do plan on making a 40k story in the future?

xafeur

@TheDarkEmperor I know don't worry it's getting prepared ;)
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TheDarkEmperor

@xafeur like the lore is/could be the same but the all the Primarchs and the Emperor are female. 
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TheDarkEmperor

@xafeur there is cool art of Genderbend Primarchs! Like really cool art.
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xafeur

I'm extremely happy to announce the new chapter of The Betrayed story is out. It is my longest chapter ever, I've put all my love in it. I truly hope it will be worth your wait! (Tomorrow I make the interlude chapter)

Sane-Person2

How are things going?
          
          (Just wondering, thats all)

Sane-Person2

@xafeur you definitely write more than I do cause I stop at three thousand words, sometimes. 
            
            But also take you time writing it!
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xafeur

@jonathan125833 Well I started the new chapter a week ago but, with my family, we worked a little to clean and made some improvements in my room and the walls so I had no way to write. Now, I can though! Though the chapter is at 3000 words right now and it's far from finished (it will certainly be the biggest chapter I'll ever make).
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