xavieriese07

Let's talk about RWBY for a second:
          	Now, I hate the episode Jaunedice mostly because of the ending in part one, where poor Velvet is being bullied by Team CRDL, and NO ONE has the nerve to save her from the bullies.
          	BUT... I saw a rewritten take by this dude @SonicBlade40
          	and HOLY CRAP...This man turned my least favourite into something awesome. I love how Ky (OC by @SonicBlade40 ) steps in and protects Velvet from the bullies. And the fight between Ky and Team CRDL was phenomenal. And Team CRDL FINALLY get punished for their bullying and discrimination.
          	Solid 10/10 rewrite.
          	link to the @SonicBlade40 's take on Jaunedice
          	link to it: https://www.wattpad.com/799065534-rwbyk-1-the-story-begins-chapter-9-jaundice
          	
          	I give props to @SonicBlade40 for this epic rewrite of Jaunedice.

xavieriese07

Let's talk about RWBY for a second:
          Now, I hate the episode Jaunedice mostly because of the ending in part one, where poor Velvet is being bullied by Team CRDL, and NO ONE has the nerve to save her from the bullies.
          BUT... I saw a rewritten take by this dude @SonicBlade40
          and HOLY CRAP...This man turned my least favourite into something awesome. I love how Ky (OC by @SonicBlade40 ) steps in and protects Velvet from the bullies. And the fight between Ky and Team CRDL was phenomenal. And Team CRDL FINALLY get punished for their bullying and discrimination.
          Solid 10/10 rewrite.
          link to the @SonicBlade40 's take on Jaunedice
          link to it: https://www.wattpad.com/799065534-rwbyk-1-the-story-begins-chapter-9-jaundice
          
          I give props to @SonicBlade40 for this epic rewrite of Jaunedice.

xavieriese07

Hey so, I recently saw this video check it out:
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jwTQxXt_Md0
          What do you think of it?

SuePodgorski

@xavieriese07 Well I thought the story would be dark but I didn't think Diesel would be scrapped in front of Duck. Peak story.
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SuePodgorski

@xavieriese07 I skimmed it and I saw Diesel in the scrapyard and knew where the story was going.
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xavieriese07

Yo, at this point @ErtlBlueBell is in first place.
          Someone let me know how you would rewrite Misty Island Rescue and Day of the Diesels.
          Also,
          PLEASE follow @ErtlBlueBell
          As he is writing The Other Sudrian Stories and possibly The Day of the Diesels Rewrite I plan on collaborating him with.
          Look at the 10/10 entry:
          https://www.wattpad.com/1537501949-how-would-you-rewrite-misty-island-rescue-and-day
          And this is his channel:
          https://www.wattpad.com/user/ErtlBlueBell

SuePodgorski

@xavieriese07 Also another thing, before I remember you going around asking everyone what their favorite and least favorite character was, are you going to do stuff like that more or was this a one off thing.
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xavieriese07

Yo I've dropped the first six.
          @ErtlBlueBell
          @ThomasStudios8
          @SethEaton1
          @SuePodgorski
          @goldwritter2001
          @Gustavo123589
          I already started with you. 
          And SPOILER: @ErtlBlueBell you're's seems to be the best.
          link to it: https://www.wattpad.com/story/393652699-how-would-you-rewrite-misty-island-rescue-and-day
          I'll do more later.

SuePodgorski

@xavieriese07 Thanks for tagging me and putting mine in.
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xavieriese07

This is a huge question:
          How would you rewrite Misty Island Rescue and Day of the Diesels?

DinoCrocGreen

@xavieriese07 Are you going to update your other AU's and I'd like to see how you would rewrite those two movies.
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