
xavieriese07
Let's talk about RWBY for a second: Now, I hate the episode Jaunedice mostly because of the ending in part one, where poor Velvet is being bullied by Team CRDL, and NO ONE has the nerve to save her from the bullies. BUT... I saw a rewritten take by this dude @SonicBlade40 and HOLY CRAP...This man turned my least favourite into something awesome. I love how Ky (OC by @SonicBlade40 ) steps in and protects Velvet from the bullies. And the fight between Ky and Team CRDL was phenomenal. And Team CRDL FINALLY get punished for their bullying and discrimination. Solid 10/10 rewrite. link to the @SonicBlade40 's take on Jaunedice link to it: https://www.wattpad.com/799065534-rwbyk-1-the-story-begins-chapter-9-jaundice I give props to @SonicBlade40 for this epic rewrite of Jaunedice.