xbeansidhex

Last three chapters are old ones, that's why they have the sonnet structure. Sorry it's been too long. I've actually been thinking about writing another story but I legit keep dropping these so maybe if it's short I'll be able to do it. 

xbeansidhex

Last three chapters are old ones, that's why they have the sonnet structure. Sorry it's been too long. I've actually been thinking about writing another story but I legit keep dropping these so maybe if it's short I'll be able to do it. 

xbeansidhex

It's been forever since I got on here this much, but I'll try to start updating both my poem book, "Kerosene Heart", and my novel, "Save Me.", Hopefully I'll have time. 
          
          I actually have quite a few poems I guess I never posted and I want to put them here so bad but then I might run out of ideas... So I'll update at a somewhat regular schedule, and hopefully get some more ideas for poems. 

xbeansidhex

Should I add a jesus/God element to my next poem? I normally try to keep it out of my work because I know some people, including myself, who have mixed feelings about that religion stuff. But I have a sorta idea about one that would involve sins relating to Jesus... anywho just a question, should I do it or would it be too controversial?

xbeansidhex

@Yellowcavalier thanks so much! This really helped me!!
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Yellowcavalier

@xbeansidhex Just add a note that it isn't for everyone,  don't care what others think as long as it doesn't hurt anyone. Random side note, if you have any questions about Bible, message me!
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WellFiddlesticks

{\__/}
          ( • w •)
          < \ Here i just wanted to give you this
          {\__/}
          ( • ○ •)
          / > ITS CHICKEN....!!
          {\__/}
          ( • ~ •)
          < \ NO? Okay then...maybe you want ummm? *looks around in kitchen*
          {\__/}
          ( • w •)
          / > PIZZAAAAA!!!
          {\__/}
          ( • _ •)
          / > N-not pizza either.....wha!
          {\_{\
          (• _ • )
          <   \ *Looks around more* uhhhh?
          {\_{\
          (○~○)
          <   \ PEACHES! I MEAN.... *puts away*
          {\_{\
          (•w• )
          < \ THE NOODLESOUP I MADE!
          {\__/}
          ( • ○ •)
          / > HERE CHU GO!
          {\__/}
          ( - . -)
          / > No!? Ugh 
          {\_{\
          (- ~ -)
          <   \ Pfffft ALCOHOL! hehehe... *sips a bit*
          {\_{\
          ( • ~ •)
          <  \ Oh yeah....um u saw nothing
          {\_{\
          ( • ○ •)
          <   \ WANT SOME-! UH I MEAN- *THROWS IT OUT*
          {\_{\
          (- ~ -)
          < <   \ forget that part man *looks again* 
          {\__/}
          ( • ○ •)
          / >  HERE YOU GO!
          {\__/}
          ( - . -)
          / > No!?.........uff-
          {\_/}
          (•. • )?
          <  \ MAYBE....HAMBURGER!!!!! 
          {\__/}
          ( •w•) ?
          / > here chu go *gives chu*
          {\__/}
          ( - _-)?
          / > NOOOOO?! WTF?!
          {\_{\
          (- _- )?
          < <   \ *looks again in the fridge*
          {\_{\
          (• .  •)?
          ❤<   \ OH!!!!!
          {\_{\
          ( • ○ •)?
          ❤<   \ I KNOW I KNOW-
          {\__/}
          ( •w• )
          / >❤ LOVE- ...OF COURSE THAT'S WHAT U WANTED *GIVES ❤❤❤

Benita_16

Hi there!
          
          I recently published my first book and I was wondering maybe you could check it out. Its called MY MATE IS MY ENEMY. It will mean a lot to me if you give my book a try. Check it out right here: https://my.w.tt/nljgRIQjwN
          
          Thank you so much and have a good day :)
          
          -Benita 

Benita_16

@xbeansidhex thanks I really appreciate it :)
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xbeansidhex

@Benita_16 ok I will check it out :) 
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xbeansidhex

PLEASE READ:
          I want to write a short book called "They Come In Twos" and it's really stupid but it would be about how everyone lives in this world where getting sick is absolutely not ok, because if you sneeze twice... You die.
          
          (Based off of the fact that I'm sick and all I do is sneeze nowadays. And that most people sneeze twice in a row)
          
          Should I do it? Is it a good idea? Or is it stupid?

StarryskiesT

@xbeansidhex It sounds like a really really good idea! Its really fresh and new concept, I would definitely read!! 
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