I love your writings I just wish that in torment their relationship wasn't so abusive. Luna is constantly apologizing for her outbursts and then her girl covers for her saying that she was asking for it. I know it gets better toward the end, but not much. Maybe I just wish that it was shown how abusive the relationship was, I'm not sure. It's just hard to read because it makes me scared that maybe this relationship is okay under some people's pov. I don't know, it just rubs me the wrong way that she stayed in that bad relationship