Disconnected_Mia

Hi, again. Umm… Just a question, since chapter nine of Being Human left me on edge (probably as much as other people), is there a possibility that you could drop chapter ten earlier than next Wednesday?
          
          I’m not pressuring anything, I just feel a heartache from your last part. Since your story is way better and captivating than what I had initially thought it would be.
          I hope to hear your answer soon.
          Goodnight.

Disconnected_Mia

OH MY GOD! Thank you so much! My heart just skipped a beat as I saw “part ten”.
            And it’s okay for the double upload. Don’t pressure yourself. You releasing chapter ten in advance is already plenty enough.
            Thank you again!
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xcherricutie

Oh, of course! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it, and I think you'll enjoy the next part, it's all about Metal Sonic. It'll take me a moment to edit it, but I can double update today.
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Disconnected_Mia

No hate, but I feel like Help You should be a story of its own, without a sequel, nor a prequel.
          It’s just my personal opinion, since the characters have changed A LOT in Being Human (I barely recognize them, Metal Sonic especially, and the fact that Sonic is now crushing on Y/N is just… wrong to me. No offense)
          Your creativity is awesome, Cherri, but I feel like these two stories should be scripts of their own.
          
          Not pressuring anything, just speaking my thoughts… :
          Help You should be a one-book story (to me)
          
          ***Not a hate mail, personal opinion only***

Disconnected_Mia

@xcherricutie It sounds like a plan, if you are okay with it. But I wouldn’t agree on you saying it’s not good. It’s amazingly well thought of, and full of creativity. I never could’ve come up stories like yours.
            (No wonder why I may or may not have made a drawing of E-124)
            
            And I’m glad you took my comments as constructive criticism, since the last thing I want to do is to offend someone. I’m delighted to have been “helpful”  (if it’s the correct term), and I hope you continue with your admirable imagination!
            
            Much appreciation and support!
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xcherricutie

@Disconnected_Mia I may end up just de-canonizing the story in the end, if I can get around to actually writing it haha. The story isn't the greatest, and I'm sure I could've done a better sequel if I'd tried harder. Anyway, I just wanted to say, I've really been appreciating your comments on my story, and I'm glad you're sharing your opinions with me. I love hearing people's thoughts, thank you!
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Disconnected_Mia

I totally understand if you didn’t want to abandon the story, and I agree, changing it would be a load of trouble.
            
            If Help You and Being Human were, as you say (if I read that correctly), to be stories of their own, Being Human could be considered as a bonus, potential story (like a possibility of what can happen in the future of Help You. I don’t know if I picked the right words for it… Hope you understand).
            Since, I kinda like to imagine what can happen next after the ending of part one.
            It’s still just my humble opinion. I’m not forcing anything, you’re the author.
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Nena070609

Excuse me @xcherricutie, You do realize that Sonic really shouldn't do any staring at Y/N, Right? You know because as far as I know about Metal Sonic, I don't think Metal is gonna be happy and he'd probably be really upset if he figured out that his arch-rival was staring at his girl, since well, according to his files, he's been obsessed with beating Sonic for a really long time, it would just make him hate Sonic even more, you know that, right?