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@Rearea1998 Yeah, I think so. The story is original but it lacks of description. But don't fall in the mistake many writers fall: giving like three paragraphs of boring description, and then forgetting about describing in the next chapters. Add some adjectives over here nad over there and the story will be ready for the Watty's!

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Hi!  I was wondering if you'd be interested in giving me your opinion on my story Strictly Business.  It's about a girl named Addelyn Cooper, who is hurt when she finds out the guy of her dreams, and best friend, Jackson, is dating another girl.  So she teams up with her worst enemy and infamous womanizer, Weston Brooks, in order to break the couple up.  
          
          Here's the link if you find the time to read it:  http://www.wattpad.com/story/1563393-strictly-business

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@Rearea1998 Yeah, I think so. The story is original but it lacks of description. But don't fall in the mistake many writers fall: giving like three paragraphs of boring description, and then forgetting about describing in the next chapters. Add some adjectives over here nad over there and the story will be ready for the Watty's!