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@jada0816 I just did. Introduced some new characters too. Tell me what you think. :)

When are u writing the next part of the story? 

@livewritelove thanks!! I got really bummed when noone read my story (it's kind of narcissistic of me, I know :p) but still...thank you so much!

Hello! I have a recommendation for your story. Maybe you should have a cover, it always makes the story more appealing. So more people would like it, you can ask for one in clubs and stuff, sometimes you don't even have to do anything in return. I hope this helped. Have a good one :P