Hi Author. Thanks for inviting me to read your book. Honestly, the story line is very interesting. If you have made this just because of a dare, i would like to dare you to expound. I am not an author myself but i love good stories. You are a good story teller btw but as a reader i would like to see more interactions from the characters. Book reading for me is like peaking through the scenes or like watching a tv. Like what would the character say when he saw them cheating or how win would talk to gulf on their first meeting. I would also like to know how you would make us fall in love the other character to justify the final decision. In short, give us something to cry on or laugh at. One last little thing, please add space in between paragraphs. Its like reading 1 paragraph on a single page. Kinda like my paragraph right now. Hahaha.
Anyways i hope this helps. For me, you did well for this attempt. Good luck on your next stories. ❤️❤️
