NiroDj

Unlikely that I'll stop reading this! But I am not going to sugarcoat this no offense but
          
           You need to brush up slightly on your grammar
          
           Also I've seen small run-on sentences
          
          
          But that's okay! Your probably new too writing like I am! 
          
          
          I love the book already
          
          Keep WRITING
          
          And if ya need anything like help or just anything plz tell me
          thenk yew~
          
          <3
          
          Niro~

xiaooreo

 Yup don’t worry, it’s okay! I know my grammar isn’t great & i need to improve <3 i appreciate any feedback at all do thank u!! 
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lonenia

Hi!! How are you? ❤️ I'm Tanya and I stumbled upon your account ♡ if you love drama/romance could you give, Sincerely, Your Lover a try? It's my first book and I'd love to hear your thoughts about it ❤️ if you don't want to, it's totally fine too. I just thought I'd ask. Have a wonderful day/night!!! And stay awesome!!!
          
          Love,
          Tanya. S ♡♡♡