Toko_Ozaki
Hello! I loved your stories (and trust me that when it comes to fan fict I’m really picky) but (I’m not hating on you, I’m just looking at a patern) I’ve noticed that you’re great at introducing the main conflict and developing it, but sometimes you don’t develop it enough or develop it so much that you don’t know how to close it.
I just wanted to say this, not a hate coment but I feel like if you planned the story in a paper before writing your work would go from great to awesome ^^
xingqlv
@Toko_Ozaki HI! you're completely right!! I've been writing a lot of works that I haven't published, and I can confidently say that my writing has changed a lot from my old genshin fics honestly i've said this a bunch of times for those fics but i rlly hate the writing and plot and everything. It's funny you say this because i just finished planning out one of my new stories on paper. Thank you for the feedback though!!! I really appreciate comments like these :]
