xinkedHeartx

Rewriting Temptations. 
          	View the first chapter & tell me what you think. 
          	
          	This will also be a mature book. 
          	
          	Mia x 

RuthJones904

@xinkedHeartx will there be anymore of this book? I loved shelter and refuge so so much ❤️ 
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GreyyWhispers

You keep saying you were 16 when u wrote shelter and refudge, but honestly its too good for a 16 year old n well too mature too... I was soo stupid, innocent , and naive just like ella at that age, even at 20 that i didnt know anything about suxh bad world. You did a great job portraying that dark. Though josh did get on my nerves and sometimes ella too, but i guess thats how all humans are. Life isnt perfect, so stories shouldn't portray them as either... 
          
          Loved your work. The ending did leave me in a place that i ended up realizing just like josh, that yeah, i loved it.. the ending chapters  i wont admit to liking the bad stuff happening to Ella 

Gentlesiddhi

I just came across your story and it looks intense—I'd love to support it. I’m currently promoting mine too, so I was wondering if you'd be open to a R4R?
          
          We can exchange chapters, give each other honest (but kind) feedback, and boost engagement. Let me know if you're in.
          
          Looking forward to your story!
          

Gentlesiddhi

I just read your books and I am wondering what happens between when Josh is shot (the last time) and roses birth like what ella faced during pregnancy, when Josh told her about his full past, are they married and how, when ella accepted her defeat etc... pls do think about it

GreyyWhispers

@Gentlesiddhi sameeee... Seems like a lot of missing info
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