xino5400

Chapter 5 and 6 will be out soon!
          	
          	These two were easier because the rewrite only needed some tweaking. I believe they are by far my strongest moments from the original stories before the rewrite.
          	
          	Let me know what you all think.
          	
          	Thanks!

xino5400

Chapter 4 is out now!
          
          Sorry I am late...Work and life just makes sitting down and writing difficult!
          
          As I said previously this is a complete re-write to introduce a stronger story in my opinion. 
          
          The next chapter will definitely look familiar but I will be making changes to the pacing and possibly add other plot points in it.
          
          Stay tuned!

xino5400

Revised Chapter 3 is out! I've tweaked it and decided to end it differently. Chapter 3 I felt combined too much into a small chapter and so I divided it up focusing more on Emile's relationship with Gareth and introducing a love interest. 
          
          If you read the previous version then it'll look and flow generally the same.
          
          Chapter 4 will be a completely original rewrite with new details and plot points and should be out next week. Be on the lookout for that!
          
          Please offer any inputs you have.
          
          Thanks!

xino5400

Hello everyone!
          
          Apologies for the long break...Life happened, new job and such but I have been missing writing again and I'm hoping coming back for another round.
          
          I'm going to be taking down my stories for now and re-writing/editing a lot of it. 
          
          I wanted to make changes to make the story flow better and hopefully get to a proper ending before starting the next book!
          
          I've got so many ideas and my brain storming chart is just full of stuff. I think I could probably write 5 books if I could haha! 
          
          Anyways, for anyone who reads this or has supported me by reading, thank you!!

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xino5400

@Hapiewaehpwah I'll take a look at it when I get a chance. :)
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xino5400

Chapter 20:Crossroads of redemption is out!
          
           I was going to release it earlier today but went through to do some heavy editing. This was a big chapter in terms of effort and storytelling. I feel like I'm finally getting the hang of this but please bare with me as I am still a novice at writing.
          
          Thanks!

xino5400

Chapter 18 is up! Sorry about the delay. Been busy with work and stuff but I'll resume my weekly schedule. If you notice any repeated lines and such (I plan to go through and manually audit my work) please let me know. I use a separate word doc to edit/write and just copy and paste and sometimes I may copy too much over. 
          
          THANK YOU ALL!
          
          Thanks!

xino5400

Good morning everyone! Normally I'm putting out one or two chapters a week but I've got a vacation coming up this week and last week I was constantly redoing Chapter 17 as the tone and the context of the story I was writing just didn't make sense. 
          
          With that said I'm hoping to have 17 out by Friday (Sooner if possible) but may not be able to get anything out the week after since I'll be on vacation. 
          
          I'm also brain storming and outlining a new original story as well so be on the lookout for news about that!
          
          Thanks!