xjoyjohannax1

@louiejang take your time! I'm very interested in your book the first chapter is very well written and you have an interesting plot! 

narrypierre

@xjoyjohannax1 hi there wow thanks! :-) let me know if there's anything that i need to improve on, on both chapters just in case you decide to read on. :-) thanks again
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xjoyjohannax1

@louiejang take your time! I'm very interested in your book the first chapter is very well written and you have an interesting plot! 

narrypierre

@xjoyjohannax1 hi there wow thanks! :-) let me know if there's anything that i need to improve on, on both chapters just in case you decide to read on. :-) thanks again
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