xmidnightangelx

@soccergirl123 I'm just really into the story and I remember it all.. Can't wait to read more it's going to be awesome

xmidnightangelx

Thaks for trying to help and it wasnt harsh at all, im not a that good at writing but i like to try.. and when i get a chance ill check out ur stories =) and i know what you mean i do have to edit both my chapters so ill put in more detail

lovatic_

hey. WELCOME TO WATTPAD! 
          i was just wondering if u could take a look at my new story, Harewood crescent? it's about this girl who loves music and she goes on this music trip and falls in love with a guy called steve.But when tradgedy strikes she doesnt know if she really can fall in love with angel.... 
          so pleaz vote...comment? maybe become a fan??? 
          its not finished yet bt all my friends love it and say its really good. 
          i know these can get annoying bt its the only way i can get peeps to read it. These things dont stay on the whats new page for any long. thanks, Amy (:

demonofdreamz

hello ^^ I know theese are really annoying buttttt it would mean a lot if you would read my stories,Dark Midnight, Vermin, andddd Tiresome Slavery comment vote, read what you want, doesn't have ot be all of them, just what you want ;D and blah blah blah, thats probably what this sounds like right? well please do though, thanks luv u all :D
          ~roar feel good inc~

alexis_rene

hey, will u read one of my stories?  u can pick which one, idc.  
          
 #1 emo prep arranged marrage  (not a normal one, i swear.  its hardly about the arranged marrage)  heres wat its about: Emilee Morganstern soon finds out that her mother has made and arranged marrage for her with a prep named Trayton Doss.  To Emilee and Her best friend, Dayton, it's horrible.  But then it soon gets better, for Trayton and Emilee Become friend.  But then A disastrous thing happens, and Emilee will never be the same again. 
          
 #2 College, friends, parties and.....  boyfriends?  (sequel to emo prep arranged marrage) heres wat it's about:  Emilee Morganstern is off to college in San Francisco.  She soon meets many new people, who befriend her, and they go to heaps of parties.  But one thing that Emilee did not expect from college is that she would have guys falling for her everywhere she went.  Which guy will Emilee choose?  Or will she choose any at all? 
          
 #3 The un-related twins  (i like to think that this story is original) heres wat its about: Oliver: A highly educated type of assassin who kills drug dealers for money in Donegal, Ireland
          Biancia: A smart prep who has no job, no boyfriend and used to be a loner before she met Katie, her friend who works at Mill Mountain Zoo in Roanoke, Virginia.
          Two entirely different people, who are un-related twins.
          
 #4 My Dream boyfriend... Not In My Fathers Eyes....  (i like to this this story is original too)  heres wat its about: Deirdra Smallders has a great life in La Cygne, Kansas.  Perfect best friend.  Perfect boyfriend.  Until a boy named Raymond Whitney moves into town.  Then, in Deirdra's eyes, everything revolves around him.  In Deirdra's eyes, he is perfect.  Until her father finds out about him...  
 #6 poems (just some poems that I have written.)
          srry fer making this message so long...   thanks fer ur time!

217starfish

hey welcome to wattpad. i would love if you would read my stories and tell me what you think. comment vote, fan. private message and i will return the favor. thanks
          
          seems like you have a good plot going. it was a little to fast. you should put more detail in and make it more realistic, not saying that its not but like saying things like my heart was pounding, i couldnt think. i felt eyes everywhere as if the trees themselve where watching my every move. i could hear it but i couldnt see it. all of a sudden i caught something at the corner of my eye. i whipped around to ts location but it was gone. all of a sudden something rushed by me leaving me frozen to the spot. i couldnt tell what it was but i felt the warmth of it, its breath grazing my cheek as it flshed by. if possible my heartbeat accelerated, i wanted to run, scream but my feet wouldnt move, as if my body was telling me that i shouldn't... if you see what i mean. if the person is uppose to be scared you should put more detail to make the reader scared and make them feel like they are in the story. by the way you can have that snipit if you want. but yes just add more detail and it will be better. you did pretty good though. keep it up. hope i wasnt harsh but i hope this helps

Jabooker

Hey Welcome to Wattpad,
          I was wondering if you could take the time to read my stories, 'The Transformation (A Werewolf Story)' and 'I was normal. Until I was changed into vampire.....royalty?!?' Please comment, vote, or if you love it, become a fan!
          
          Thanks a Plenty,
          JaBooker