xnobodypotatox

These are my personal favourite pieces, what are yours? https://www.wattpad.com/story/114745780

xnobodypotatox

Can anyone give me feedback on "If only, if only the woodpecker sings" please?:) It would be much appreciated!

NicoleYong400

@xnobodypotatox I love it! It's the most beautiful poem I ever read. Beautiful is an understatement. Perhaps I adore this piece. Each and every word allowed the readers to empathise your circumstances and the intensified sadness you felt (while writing this piece) . The piece does not contain bombastic words but words that held great meanings to them. The first stanza greatly captures the attention of the readers and set the right mood and tone for the entire piece. Great job indeed and this is not an achievement that possibly be achieved by ordinary teenagers.
Reply

xnobodypotatox

5/7/15: This marks a year of this journey. I would say it was a wonderful journey thanks to all of you who read it, however this journey was sad to begin with. It was written when I finally had the courage to face reality. I never thought I would have progressed this far, but I would like to thank each and everyone of you readers who had read my silly little book.
          Thank you for putting up with my poor English and following my writing journey.
          It's been made pleasant cause of all of you.
          Thank you and take care:)
          Beth