Anna

Your bio! I LOVE 5H and 1D and Ari 

@GirlOnFire3 oh lol 

Lol u know I'm kidding right

@Niallsbabe_1020 hahaha I could see that lol THANKS FOR THE FOLLOW!:-)

@Bubbles_da_hero thanks for that I'm wirting a story now about Niall and I'm also a Niall girl

I think maybe of u add more explanation on how they met like u still can on the that chapter like u can go back 2 years and how they met its up to u its your story. I really like both of your story and your friend is probably loving u for making a story about her. ESPECIALLY BECAUSE ZAYN IS A SMEXY BEAST! But...... I'm and always will be a Niall's girl!:-)

I read your stories they are really good and cant wait for u to update, but if you just take more time on explaining your charcter and add more details to explain it better that would be good for your future readers! On your first story though I think u rushed things to fast don't take this the wrong way I am not saying it was bad because I liked it I am just saying to explain more. You always start with the same begining on the two stories it doesn't give you much athe stories