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Hey there, I'm not new here but I'm new to writing stories. Check out my first Historical fiction story and kindly share your feedback, it has more chapters to come, this is just the beginning. It hardly takes 8 mins to read and it would really help me. Would love to hear it from you regarding this
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/327543315?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=DATTA17&wp_originator=LuHsDpgOwgISdJcNVO4BpmVDcJAqLNNfNrNoB6Vioe6x9WkIlWZ4Qh9qtIJr59R2Sl4Nwk9f1uubiqVM8%2BGT%2F7DkgzaejmUWJPiFiDvrgi11IEyue2asp45kxg7cs3Ad

Hi so I read your bio and I relate to so much of it but my one question... dO yOu lIkE mAlEc?!

My story hit 5k? Why? XD

Hey 
          Our profile pic is same.

I took chapters 11 and 12 down because chapter 11 is being completely Rewritten all together. Previous chapters were also edited but nothing too extreme

Thanks for the follow!