xoxWaterlilyxox

Hi I like your story and I hope that you will read mine too there is just one part -7 Years of Bloody Love-

@xoxWaterlilyxox ur very welcome

@taliciaem Thank you! :3

Jade is a really pretty name. :) http://oi47.tinypic.com/e8n048.jpg

@xoxWaterlilyxox was it helpfull ^^ tomorrow i will do the other chapters :)

done i sent it to you ^^
          could you read my first chapter of my story and comment on it thank you~

Grammar and spelling especially!
          
          If you're up for a little bit more though (don't wanna work you too hard ^^;) you could help me fix the way I write my sentences, since some of them are pretty messy. :3
          
          Thank you so much!

while reading your story is their anything you want me to pay attention to? or focus on something like grammar or spelling??

@randarachel Yes please, that would be so helpful. Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! <3

i like reading story so maybe i can proofread your story and help you edit the mistakes ^^