Genesis

I have written an AI story. Can you please share your feedback. thanks

can u read my story?.... thanx.... :D

anyways your scribbles are really good and please post some more! :D 
          
          Awwr! That bit made me laugh :P
          Is it? Who wrote it, I am going out today and might buy it :D
          Don't worry if you can't reply in time, I'll find it :D
          Im not sure yet!! I am about to read :)

@TwigletLover 
          Thanks sophie for posting something on my board ! You really should read The Truth About Forever its really good! That part makes me cry to alot to when they desert him in the woods. ]: I noticed when i first became your fan i was reading your info. and were the same age. lol anyways your scribbles are really good and please post some more! :D 

Hello Genesis,
          I'd like to say thanks for liking Dear Kate :D 
          I was just reading your info before I wrote this and we are very similar!
          I was going to read The Truth About Forever, the other day but then somehow didn't. I also love A.I! But it makes me cry when they desert him in the woods! :O
          I am about to read Don't Let Me Go, As I think if someone takes the time to read my silly little scribbles I can read theirs :D
          

Thanks for fanning me!!! I really appreciate it