@evil-dead you're not discourteous at all! Haha I am by no means a professional writer, but I appreciate the sentiment. Your message is actually quite timely -- I'm currently studying editing at Simon Fraser University and was going to post an ad in the forums for people who are looking for someone to read over their story. I'd be happy to do a copy edit and give you some thoughts about character/plot, if you like. I glanced over your story and it sounds interesting. I also love Gillian Flynn's novels.
Let me know if you're interested. I'd be checking your story for all the mechanical parts (spelling, capitalization, punctuation, hyphenation, abbreviations, etc.) as well as grammar and syntax. You wouldn't need to do anything in return -- I'm looking for more editing experience.