Hello, Jay!
I just wanted to drop by and tell you that I really love your story Raven Feathers. It's not often that a story catches my attention the way yours has done (you can always check my list of favorite reads, haha!) and I just wanted you to know that I truly appreciate your work.
I think you've great talent, you have a very good language and your imagination, description and imagery is great, and together they create a very vivid world in my head.
I can't wait for your next update, it will be a pleasure to see what will happen next ^_^ So keep writing, you are writing something very awesome here, I tell you. And thank you for sharing it! ^_^