goyanggi
Hi Ewi :P
I really like your story "//Her//". But there are a couple of mistakes here and there. You should proofread them before publishing, I think the book would be more popular that way. Maybe you should have a partner, like you write the story then send it to your partner, then he/she will proofread it and fix the mistakes. It's only a suggestion, like if you get too busy to proofread it yourself or something..
