xx_Loser_xx

aww thankyou <3
          	

xx_Loser_xx

i still really like the story, i just know that when you loose someone that close to you you do show how upset you are even if you dont normally show your feelings, im exactly like that, but my best friend took his own life and that was the first time i showed how i felt he was like a brother to me, i just think it would make the book better but its your story and your doing great ! xx
          

pearsong16

I'm sorry I dissapointed you with how my story is going :/ i wanted to let you know she truly is sad but shes doing what I do in real life. I dont show when Im sad or upset or hurt for many reasons, the main one being I dont want to burden people and thats how I created Ari's charater in my mind. She is all give and no take and shes also all helping others never helping herself. Do you understand what im doing in the story now? Im really sorry that you dont like the story anymore :/