xx_bianca_xx

sorry im only a kid sir @hobnails

Hobnails

Hi Bianca, Thanks for the follow. I had a look at your story Bianca, but found it a difficult read as you've done no editing. You'll find most people will see it in the same way. We all read to a Convention  we were taught at school and want the story not a new way of reading. I'm talking spelling, punctuation and basic grammar here. Unless you pay some attention to these matters I'm afraid you'll not be getting many reads, votes or comments. Wishing you every success. Hobnails

Hobnails

@xx_bianca_xx Please don't apologise for being young!!! I was not criticising but trying to guide you. If you need any help, please ask. You have a talent for writing and putting it down in a form that readers can accept takes a little practice. I'm a great del older than you and I am still learning. Don't be down. keep trying. Best Wishes.  Hobnails
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