xx_dinah_writing_xx

Hi guyyys! 
          	
          	You could have noticed that I took down Valar Morghulis. Well, I’m rewriting it. Cause every time I thought of the way I wrote it at the beginning, I cringe. The plot holes. The out of character characters. Weird flow. Well, I decided I want to fix it. So I hope you’ll like it. And there are also some stuff I want to change in the story. The plot, you know.  Sooooo… stay tuned. 

RachelRamirez940

@xx_dinah_writing_xx  oh ok  yea agree with you especially the way the IC acted it felt very off  especially since they are not like that in the books i really wanted them to all get along and even see some bonding  I didn’t like how it made the main fmc look mad idk how to explain it but everything felt off  it was supposed to be a azriel and Dameon fic which i had hoped to see  and without the drama of Elain bc that girl has her own mate  and idk it felt uncomfortable and unnecessary in my opinion  especially her kids they felt like they were just there  I hope to see her have kids with azriel and Dameon and raise them in the NC  with there dragons  .sorry if it seems judgmental etc what I wrote it’s just when I went back to read it before it got taken down everything felt off especially with aella going crazy and azriel getting scared it felt weird to me bc I hated that whole thing and then suddenly alicent doing what she did when in the show she didn’t like her father etc  I wanted her and nyra to be happy free where they were  sorry ill shut up now  can’t wait to what u come up with !
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

Hi guyyys! 
          
          You could have noticed that I took down Valar Morghulis. Well, I’m rewriting it. Cause every time I thought of the way I wrote it at the beginning, I cringe. The plot holes. The out of character characters. Weird flow. Well, I decided I want to fix it. So I hope you’ll like it. And there are also some stuff I want to change in the story. The plot, you know.  Sooooo… stay tuned. 

RachelRamirez940

@xx_dinah_writing_xx  oh ok  yea agree with you especially the way the IC acted it felt very off  especially since they are not like that in the books i really wanted them to all get along and even see some bonding  I didn’t like how it made the main fmc look mad idk how to explain it but everything felt off  it was supposed to be a azriel and Dameon fic which i had hoped to see  and without the drama of Elain bc that girl has her own mate  and idk it felt uncomfortable and unnecessary in my opinion  especially her kids they felt like they were just there  I hope to see her have kids with azriel and Dameon and raise them in the NC  with there dragons  .sorry if it seems judgmental etc what I wrote it’s just when I went back to read it before it got taken down everything felt off especially with aella going crazy and azriel getting scared it felt weird to me bc I hated that whole thing and then suddenly alicent doing what she did when in the show she didn’t like her father etc  I wanted her and nyra to be happy free where they were  sorry ill shut up now  can’t wait to what u come up with !
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

Hello lovely people. 
          
          I have decided yet to make another Daemon Targaryen fan fiction. I expect the first chapter to come out today, so stay tuned! I've decided to try and take a different approach now, so I hope you'll like it. <3

xx_dinah_writing_xx

Oh hi! So I am rewriting it. Not everything, but some portion of it. Cause I ended it with a knowledge that I had left so many plot holes behind. Plus I don’t like some parts of the book now. 
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RachelRamirez940

@xx_dinah_writing_xx helloo I saw that u were updating the fic  again  ? Is the whole plot changing or are u just editing it ?  I’m just wondering if u did change a lot of things so I can go read it again ??!
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y0urgirl_maraya

Hello! I was just wondering if i could read your story without having watched house of dragons? I love acotar and dragons so i dont know. If not thats okay! Thank u 

xx_dinah_writing_xx

ABSOLUTELY!! You could give it a try that’s for sure. It begins in the Acotar settings so there shouldn’t be a problem. Although, I am guilty of making the inner circle out of character a little bit. . So I’m sorry for that. It could get a little overwhelming in the act two I think. Because the act starts in the hotd world. But, I believe it is kind of a smooth transition. 
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Mrsheartts

Hello! I wanted to ask for advice on how you find inspo to write and publish chapters for your book! Since I have been having trouble getting inspiration to write. Edit, and publish

Mrsheartts

@xx_dinah_writing_xx omg I’m late to reply but thanks for the advice! I think I need to write a short summary of it and add writing it down later. Also for the TikTok thing I deleted it before the ban and I can’t download it :((
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

I think watching TikTok edits of daemon definitely helped me to choose him in the end. And it also motivated me to continue writing. 
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

That’s how I found out, that they would not work out as a trio couple. As cool as it sounded to me in the beginning. It was just not realizable. 
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

Hello lovely people, I’m sorry to inform you about the next chapter’s delay in the release. I got sick. And as much as I’d love to write, I physically cannot bring myself to. I really wanted to publish at least two chapters this weekend. But, if everything goes well, I’ll publish them during the week. I’m not promising Monday, but soon. 
          
          - Dinah

xx_dinah_writing_xx

Thank you. ☺️ I’m really sad to hear about you being unwell as well. Hope you get healthy asap. 
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RachelRamirez940

@xx_dinah_writing_xx  hope u get better  !! I haven’t been the best either headaches are the worst so I’m constantly taking naps I feel so drained 
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

I know I have not updated the book in a few days, but I am away on a trip and I do not want to spend it by writing the whole time. So, the new chapters will come out during the weekend. Thank youuuu. 

RachelRamirez940

@xx_dinah_writing_xx thank youu ! I really enjoy ur writing I can’t wait for more fics take care !
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

@RachelRamirez940 good luck with it then. I think you have some great ideas cooking 
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RachelRamirez940

@xx_dinah_writing_xx  maybe in the future  bc i really want to  but im busy with work so it takes up most of my time :) 
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xx_dinah_writing_xx

I know the updates have not been coming regularly recently, so I want to apologize for that. But this weekend, a new chapter of Valar morghūlis will be uploaded. And I’m also debating on fixing the latest chapter as well. So stay patient and tuned. I love y’all. 

xx_dinah_writing_xx

@RachelRamirez940 so, I write a chapter and then I publish it immediately. So, I do not have anything pre written. But, there are some new chapters due to this weekend. So stay tuned. And, I am open to writing another hotd fan fictions. That’s for sure. 
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RachelRamirez940

@xx_dinah_writing_xx sorry ik u must be busy but I was hoping if u would be able to upload two a day if there’s only very little left of the fic the cliffhangers dont do me justice i want it over so i can re read it . By any chance will u do another house of the dragon fic ?!
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RachelRamirez940

Hello..I was curious to when a new chapter will be coming out  I really want her to remember!? 
          
          And in this book is Elain with Lucian   Bc I can’t wait for azriel and daemon and  aella together !!

xx_dinah_writing_xx

Hi! I’m currently working on a chapter so I think it’ll be out by the end of this week. And as for the Lucien and Elian. I cannot say much without spoiling the story, so you’ll have to wait and see. 
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