xx_dinah_writing_xx
Hi guyyys!
You could have noticed that I took down Valar Morghulis. Well, I’m rewriting it. Cause every time I thought of the way I wrote it at the beginning, I cringe. The plot holes. The out of character characters. Weird flow. Well, I decided I want to fix it. So I hope you’ll like it. And there are also some stuff I want to change in the story. The plot, you know. Sooooo… stay tuned.
RachelRamirez940
@xx_dinah_writing_xx oh ok yea agree with you especially the way the IC acted it felt very off especially since they are not like that in the books i really wanted them to all get along and even see some bonding I didn’t like how it made the main fmc look mad idk how to explain it but everything felt off it was supposed to be a azriel and Dameon fic which i had hoped to see and without the drama of Elain bc that girl has her own mate and idk it felt uncomfortable and unnecessary in my opinion especially her kids they felt like they were just there I hope to see her have kids with azriel and Dameon and raise them in the NC with there dragons .sorry if it seems judgmental etc what I wrote it’s just when I went back to read it before it got taken down everything felt off especially with aella going crazy and azriel getting scared it felt weird to me bc I hated that whole thing and then suddenly alicent doing what she did when in the show she didn’t like her father etc I wanted her and nyra to be happy free where they were sorry ill shut up now can’t wait to what u come up with !