Wow 2,000 reads? Thats crazy! I never thought i would be seeing BBYKI with that many reads/votes/comments! It really means the world, and i appreciate it sooo much. thank you guys so much! I love you all!
P.S. Theres just so much going on right now, and I have like no time to update anything. It sucks, i know. Im sorry. But spring break is coming up and I might actually update? yay.
Well i guess thats it...
~Kriss x
Sooo.. I've been thinking about it for a while and... I'm changing my fanfiction "Dont Forget" into a teen fiction. But dont worry... I might have another fanfiction up soon! Well, not soon, but I WILL post it. I just dont know when. Okay byeee :)
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Back Before You Know It Critique
I actually really liked your story. The plot was amazing and Rileys thoughts really explain who she is as a person. I really liked how in the beginning of the story you put in the Bella Swan analogy. Besides thinking it was funny, I thought it really explained (for the people that read Twilight) how extremely her depression was over Brian.
The only things I suggest are sentence variation and slowing down the romance a little bit. Show it growing instead of rushing into it. Other than that I really liked it. And this is coming from someone that doesn't read Fan Fiction.
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