itsnotzaahhh

Heyyy<3
          
          I am writing a book called promises and I am kind of new to this writing thing and I've only posted one chapter soo would you take a look at my book and tell me if it's missing something and if I need to add something to it and all and what you feel about my writing if it's terrible could you pleaseee please help me how to improve it as I really enjoyed writing the first chapter and I am a bit excited... So if you do have the time please check it out will you... 
          
          Thank you for your time<3

itsnotzaahhh

Heyyy<3
            
            Thank you for checking out my book and I'm so happy to hear that you loved the idea and about the 'I' I'll correct it from now on thanks for pointing it out and thank you for reaching back to me and reading my book it's really reallyyyy means a lot to me... 
            
            Thanks loveee<3
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xxemss

heyy, I have started reading your book and I LOVE the idea . A small error I noticed is that you need to capitalise a singular ‘I’. Other than that, it’s amazing, I’ll continue reading as you write more. <3
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