horlahmidey25

I think The Gravity of Red is exceptionally well-written, but it’s currently optimized for the wrong reader behavior. Wattpad rewards emotional immediacy before intellectual depth.
          
          As a beta reader, I focus on helping literary stories retain readers without compromising voice by tightening hooks, front-loading emotional stakes, and guiding reader engagement.
          
          I don’t change what you’re saying. I help more people stay long enough to hear it.

Tanaki_Yui

Hello, and apologies for the interruption.
          
          If you're interested in Romance stories, I’d love for you to check out my novels on Wattpad:
          
          < [ Forgiveness Isn't the Same as Forgetting ] >
          
          Forgiveness Isn't the Same as Forgetting follows the emotional journey of John and Mara-once deeply in love, now separated by a painful past shrouded in silence. After five years of absence, Mara returns with a truth that shatters John's world: a secret pregnancy, a devastating illness, and the heartbreaking choice that tore them apart. As they navigate the fragile space between forgiveness and forgetting, they discover that true love doesn't erase pain but chooses to heal despite it. This poignant tale explores how love endures beyond mistakes, absence, and loss-inviting readers to believe in second chances where healing is messy, imperfect, and beautiful.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395689422?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Tanaki_Yui
          
          
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          Thank you so much for taking the time to read. I’d truly appreciate your thoughts or feedback if you give them a try!

easzy458

I hope all is well with you. Haven't seen anything from you. I hope you are still writing!! Would love for you to update your stories on Samcro especially Jax. Loving your stories. They are the stories you don't want to stop reading. Exciting! Please update!!Thank you for your stories!

AgentCastle77

I love you because you put two of my top favorites male actors onto one book . . . Tom Hardy and Charlie Hunnam!! 

AgentCastle77

 Your extremely welcome friend 
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xxftxxb

@AgentCastle77 Haha, thank you so much for your kind words!
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