Eranu Takeru

Re-reading my novel made me realize that I made a lot of mistakes, not just in grammar and pacing, but in the plot settings that don't fit within the same subject (because there are a lot of changes needed). 
          
          My apologies for my incohesive writing. I've suffered from mental disorders (social anxiety and GAD), and life has had a lot of ups and downs over the past two years, which has contributed to this gibberish writing. 
          
          Now, I am a developing person who is honing my skills to be better than in my previous days. I still aim to be a better writer. I will keep myself busy editing each of the chapters to make the plot more cohesive.
          
          Please be patient with me as I will be uploading a new chapter of Haven sooner.

Hi! I am Elysium404, You can call me Li/e and I’m so sorry for plugging on your board! :,)
          
          I am a newbie in writing mystery thriller stories! Below is my new published story. I hope you will check it out ^^
          
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          ENIGMA AT SOLACE
          Language: TAG-LISH
          
          At St. Solace Academy-a prestigious haven for budding detectives-students devote themselves to mastering the art of mystery-solving. While everyone goes about their usual routine at the school, an aspiring detective-who never gives up on finding the truth-uncovers a shocking secret hidden in the quiet hallways. This discovery completely changes what people thought they knew about the school.
          
          Joining the pursuit is the academy's elite cadre of detectives: eight exceptionally talented students whose unique skills and courage set them apart. Together, they plunge into a pulse-pounding journey where every clue leads to dangerous surprises and unexpected twists. As each piece of evidence deepens the mystery, they must unite to expose the secret that could forever transform the academy
          
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          https://www.wattpad.com/1236324711?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Elysium404

A Sort of Home
          
          Most people might say home is a place where you have a family, 
          But why does family feel like they are not trying to make it home, 
          Foundations and rules that felt like being governed by a higher-up, 
          They rather make you quiet and obey their words than your freedom of speech because their words are far superior to yours. 
          
          It makes you dazzles from their morals that make right and wrong seemed twisted. 
          It makes you enjoy being a hypocrite than being innocent for good. 
          It makes you feel like following their ideal child than your own self-image. 
          It makes you unimportant because your true self is only a partial to them. 
          
          Are you depressed? There is something wrong with you.
          Are you sad? Fix that.
          Are you asking for support? Then you should us sooner. 
          Are you facing any problems? There are people who suffer more than you. 
          
          It does not feel home.
          It is tiresome, bothersome, and exhausting. 
          It made my mind deranged. 
          I haven't been myself. 
          
          I like to feel home, so I can know where I can return to. 
          

I know it's like months now, and apologize for not updating my novel, but I will assure you that the day will come. 
          
          I just have some personal problems that I am having now. So, I have to prioritize my mental health. :3

Hello
          Thank you for all the feedback you left on my book <3 Don't worry about the delay, I am a college student myself, so I fully understand

Hello
          Niticed we have been paired up for the assignment. Looking forward to working with you <3

I wish I can be enthusiastic as I was but it's hard. 
          
          I love writing but I am only one person here...

Taking criticism is a must but fixing will take a while. I'm trying my best to separate writing and grammar but it's stressful haha. 
          
          It makes writing less enjoyable, but still, I don't want to lose. >:3 Haven is not dead. It's just a lot to adjust. 

A Wall
          
          You are a wall when a person walks,
          They fascinate you like they are in a museum,
          Minute, Hour, Days, Months, and Years of looking at you,
          Then they left finding something more interesting.
          
          Another walks by again,
          Is it an acquaintance, friend, or might be a relationship?
          It first glances at you for any seconds, minutes, or hours,
          then they left finding something more interesting.
          
          Another one but it is a potential one, 
          A supposed to be forever friend or relationship
          But nature's calls, it was sent back home
          Hoping to find another again, because it only took one chance.
          
          A potential one,
          A hopping chance,
          A hoping bright colours,
          A hope of painting the wall.
          
          The wall is pale with a lot of cracks
          The wall is broken but never sightless,
          The hope of waiting to be paint is running thin,
          The wall is so small to be paint, then it accepts.

Still
          
          Like an ocean waves,
          Like a dribbling ball,
          Same bounces of trance.
          Same waves of trance.
          
          Maintaining the balance is a hard quest,
          Distraction is the boss
          Procrastination is the enemy
          Boredom is our fragility
          
          Sooner, balance will be useless.
          Sooner, balance will be meaningless.
          Without a medium that will uphold us.
          Without a single whisper of words that could encourage us.