@waterfreak123 Hey no problem, it's cool. xD I'm going to be honest here, at the beginning I thought it was going to be really depressing and sad. I'm not sure if I'm exactly wrong because I haven't read the first chapter because it's not up yet, -which is totally fine, take your time writing- but it could turn into something really happy and positive. I like your personification on the water, that's really captivating when someone is reading. It enhances the readers experience. This has a lot of potential, and I would love to continue reading it. Great start my dear, it's wonderful. <3~c: With all my love, Katie Lee. ^-^