RudranshZap

What is your actual problem ?? Why every time you trying to find logic 

firstloveour

@RudranshZap  logic nhi dudhe?? Are you for real ?? Kisi vi cheater womenizer ke sath female lead ko end kr de that's ok for you??? I have seen the worst level of pathetic nibbis but not like you kiddy.
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xxlivoys

@RudranshZap who the f are you ????? Who the hell are you ??? Teko kya problem hai bhai ?? Koi sach bol rha h to tere g@nd me jalan kyu ho rhi hai ??? It's your book??? Or your father's ???? Who the hell are you, i will give my opinion aur ye mature logo ke liye hai na ki 13-12 sal ki chutiyo ke liye samjhi?
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xxlivoys

@priyaaav Meko log bohot pyar krte hai hate nhi krte hai lekin Teri tarah bezzat nhi krte jese tu hoti hai behen , i mean wannabe nibbi  ko koi serious to leta nhi tujh jesi you know. Mene nhi bohot dekha hai lekin Teri jesi obsessed , psycho boot licker aaj tak nhi dekhi , I bet tujhe koi bhi apne bas baithne na de teri itni aukat nhi hai ,itni negative energy hai teri , maine at first place tujh se bat vi nhi ki guess lekin koi kitna mere bare me soch sakta hai ye mujhe aaj pata chala, fan hai kya tu meri huhh ?? Aise kyu acting kr rhi hai nibbi jese mere bare me janti hai , tu kitni badi kutiya ho sakti hai , i know teri aukat sirf dusre ke opinion ko degrade Krna hai lekin kuch to kr le jindagi me , nikal na nibbi sach me tujhe dobara dekh le yad Krna pada tha ki tu h kon tb pata chala cheater defender hai tu, vhi jisko bohot pyar tha manwh0r3 womenizer cheater character se , kitna koi ghatiya ho sakta hai yarrrr chiiiii , thuu hai tere pe.

xxlivoys

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@priyaaav ale ale le le nibbi ko hurt ho gya kya ???? Kyuki mene reality bol di this iski mommy ke book pe , main hi nhi bohot logo ne ?? Abhi tu phir khachri nibbi muh uthake tese to bat vi nhi ki mene i guess, lekin dekh aa gyi, who even take a nibbi 13 year old serious specially like you ??! Do you have any other work rather then licking boot of some writers ??? Do you know you all get trolled too, a khachran nibbis like you, typical reader of Wattpad, illiterate kid everyone knew readers like you 13-14 even there are reels about kids like you , how they boot lick other authors, and when sameone show them reality or talk to sameone else you all jump on the conversation?? Nibbi tujhe nibbi hi bolenge, tum log ko serious hi nhi leta , tujh se to bat vi nhi ki thi mene at first place jha tak i remember, tere baap ka hai Wattpad right??? Koi kisi or book ko support na kre feedback de to teri jal jati hai , padh le thoda, vakaalat mat kr dusro ki, i know you have nothing else to do wannabe nibbis and don't worry neither i give a fuck , like srsly i ignored you but you again come , talking about me to sameone else, i mean how can someone be so obsessed, i know i offended you badly back then your kid self hasn't moved on from that humiliation, for you cheating/manwh0r3 mafia guy is hot and good licking, i mean every nibbi's favorite character right?? Ohhh lordddd wtf I'm even talking to you like why . I know truth hurts you , meko ye bhi pata hai ma bap kovtere regret ho rha hai tujhe paida kr ke , kyuki uljad to jindgi me to kuch pai nhi hai yha ake bakwas kr rhi hai , tujhe to direct jalane ki jarurat hai behen mar hi ja tabhi parents Ko chain ayega tere , vaise bhi kalank hai tere jesi nibbi.

xxlivoys

@theunknowndesiauthor listen here you 
          B!t*h no one talked to you , that was a book pk Wattpad a public platform and people give feedback , you'll write sh!t then you'll get  criticize ni matter what, and you giving me warning like kiddy nibbi ???  Do i look scared what you'll do ??? Let me see too .
          Learn some basic understanding, get some good knowledge at first place nibbi and educated enough yourself so you could understand basic English writting, you didn't have answer about the thing i mentioned and you talking here ?? Get some life and basic education first nibbi.

aishuwrts

Heyy @xxlivoys <33
          I saw you added my book "Torn Between Them" on your reading list!
          I hope you'll enjoy the story! Whenever you read, I'd genuinely love to hear your thoughts - your comments truly make my day ^^
          Right now, I'm writing a multi couple romance (We Made Vows), you can check it out!! <33
          I'm currently working on "The Crowned Envy" - a historical royal romance (Book 1 of "The Crowned Sins" duet), if that's something you'd enjoy!
          You can also check out my other book "The Silent Obsession" (Book 1 of "The Silent Series") - my other projects are a bit on hold for now!
          And if you'd like, you can follow me here, on Instagram, and Scrollstack (@aishurts) for updates and extra content!
          Thank you again for your support, it means more than you know <33

TerraNova856

Hey! I saw your comment and thought I’d recommend my story because your reading taste feels really similar to mine ❤️
          
          My book is called Guarded Heart, and it starts with a fun, warm school environment  cousins, siblings, teasing, banter, friendship, and found family vibes. Nothing heavy at first just characters growing, bonding, and living their teenage life.
          
          As the story moves forward, the emotional depth starts showing.
          
          The main character, Aria, is a quiet girl who joins a new school. She’s kind, observant and soft, but she also struggles with her past and doesn’t open up easily. She doesn’t trust fast, but once she loves someone, she loves deeply.
          
          Then there’s Shivansh  calm, patient, emotionally mature, and protective in a silent way. He’s not the arrogant type he’s the one who sees people and understands them. Their bond starts slow: stolen glances, small conversations, shared silence… and eventually trust.
          
          Around them, there are two more couples forming Rohan & Avni (enemies to lovers energy) and Saavi & Akshat (friends, hidden feelings, tension). The friend group becomes a huge part of the story  supporting each other through school chaos, family moments, jealousy, heartbreak, healing and love.
          
          As the chapters progress, the book becomes more emotional and personal. Aria’s past starts affecting her present, and Shivansh steps up not to “fix” her, but to stand beside her while she learns to heal.
          
          So overall, the book has: ✨ slow-burn romance
          ✨ emotional growth and trust-building
          ✨ friendship, family bonds and comfort
          ✨ supportive male lead
          ✨ characters with depth and personality
          ✨ moments that feel warm, soft, relatable and real
          
          If you ever want to try a story that feels like comfort + emotion + slow-burn love, I’d love for you to give Guarded Heart a chance. 
          No pressure — just sharing in case it matches your vibe ✨ 

priyaaav

@theunknowndesiauthor usko bolne ka koi fayda nhi hai.... Psycho hai wo... I mean really psycho... Bs whi same hate comments sbki stories pr krti hai... Same dialogues nibbi niibbi 12 year old 14 year old... Ye kr dungi account uda dungi.... Don't waste your time Or energy on a pig like her... Just block her or she'll report your story.... And clearly she is some badtameez teenager.. Uske baat  krne ke dhang se saaf pta chlta hai manners tameez sikhai nhi gyi hai use...maa baap ne  2 thappad mare hote to ye harkate na hoti.. Bs keyboard warrior bni baithi hai.. Pehli baar itni negativity dekhi hai maine bhai.. Ekdm hi zehar bhara hua hai uske andr... Pta nhi real life me log kaise jhelte honge ise.... Just pray to God is jaise psycho log aapki story se door hi rhe 
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theunknowndesiauthor

@priyaaav my comment is not for youuuu huhu, i was directing it to this xxlivoys  who has been spreading hate for no fcking reason!
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