@xxtaylorbearxx
I lied, I just started writing a new fanfiction y’all. So if you wanna give it a quick read. I’ve only published the prologue so far but I want to see if people will even like it. Please go vote and comment your opinions. ❤️
https://www.wattpad.com/story/210432620-a-devil%27s-kiss-boku-no-hero-academia
Don’t mock me! I LOVE MY BOKU NO HERO BRO. Also didn’t know you still used this account lol
SORRY! I’m no longer posting fan fictions I’ve taken them all down. I’d give an explanation but honestly there’s no real good excuse! To the very few people who were reading those books sorry!!!
https://www.change.org/p/yg-entertainment-hanbin-shouldn-t-have-to-leave-ikon I feel terrible about what’s happening and Just want to show BI my support! If you do too this is a petition!
No problem❤❤
Hi! How are you? I just had time to read your fanfic and really enjoyed the concept. I think the idea is very promising, the main character is unique in personality and the way she describes her friend was very rich. I would personally consider writing in 3rd POV for obvious reasons, or maybe some chapters like in either Jimin, V, or Eujin's POV, I think that would be interesting. Also, what you did at the beginning is called 'info dumping'. It's not bad, but I would recommend to start off with a kick, or with an action, and then break down the info your reader needs to know about the OC, after the reader is already hooked. You know? Idk if I explained myself, but basically you need to have your reader interested and invested on the protagonist to then explain everything about her. It's something I have research and I would recommend you to do. You have a very hard job, and I am surprised you pulled it off. To describe things as a blind person requires talent, and I am sure you will continue to surprise us ( us as in your readers XD). Hope my feedback is helpful, and tell me if you have questions or comments. Thank you for supporting my fanfic when I need it the most, and have a nice day <3
JUST POSTED A NEW FANFIC!! Called “I Can Hear Your Love!” I’ve But a whole lot of effort on this one I really like where I’m going with that story and challenging myself. So please check it out!! I will be updating it every other week!! Check out please!!
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I know I asked you to check out my last book but can you read this on and tell me if it good
Vote,Comment,Share please
https://my.w.tt/BmhJ8FgslL
Umm... Did you know that you had the same story as "SugasSecretSister". You know your story "Kidnapping BTS!!", you guys got the same story. Like exact same cover and description and everything. I just randomly found out so its nothing to do with me. Just letting you know.
@BloodSugaTae it’s fine. Lol, my other one has more votes and views but I really want to get rid of that account. But a lot of people haven’t seen that so they don’t know that I’m moving it to this account.
@BloodSugaTae can you go to the one on the other account and read the last chapter. “SUPER IMPORTANT.” For me please. https://www.wattpad.com/479665375-kidnapping-bts-super-important Thank you. Yeah
Heyy! I invite you to check out my new story :D I would love if you give me feedback ❤️❤️❤️https://my.w.tt/0rV506vO1K
Omg what can I say? First if all, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. You are the first feedback I have ever read from my writing. I do value more the plot and characters than the grammar while I write, and I have now notice that it is a very bad mistake. Yes, you guessed right, english is my second language, although I have been studying it since I was a little kid. I take all you comments in the best way possible, and I have learned so much from it. Thank you, you are a very objective and precious person. Please keep reading, I would LOVE to keep hearing from you, and if possible, read more feedback. I have so many things planed for this story, and boring had nothing to do with it. I wish you a very happy life, and hope to keep in contact.
THANK YOU❤️
@carolol321321 I checked it out 10/10!!! That’s got to be one of the best 방탄소년단 fanfics ever!!! Feedback: Grammar throughout the book is a bit off, you use a lot of commas, you start a lot of sentences with and, you spell okay a bit weird in in my opinion, and there are spaces before a lot of dialogue. BUUUUT!!! The story is amazing and all those errors are very small and I make them all the time to. There was one sentence that threw me off a little bit though. It was the second paragraph in in the third chapter. It confused me a bit and I didn’t understand the wording. And in chapter 5 you spelled physically wrong. Buuuuuuutttt!!!! I really love ur story!!! IM SO EXCITED FOR UPDATES!!! I NEED MORE!!! You’re an amazing writer and I hope to see your book gain lots of love. Don’t take this the wrong way as me hating on the way you write. These are simple mistakes, plus I think English is ur second language right? But if you download grammerly I think it’ll fix those small mistakes. That’s what I did . So, good luck!! FIGHTING