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@guilaesthetic @guilaesthetic May ipapayo lang po ako. The first sentences should be in capital letters. I am just helping you improve kasi maganda ang story mo although hindi ko pa nababasa pero maganda yung story description. Capital letters are very important especially when you're writing a story it will make a good impression to everyone if you like someone to like it. I hope that you'll continue these story to the end.