ann_o_nemos

Could you read my newest story? “I’m Body Guarding the President’s Jerk Son…Who is HOT! FML”. Comment and vote plz!
          
          Carly Dupont is not a normal seventeen-year-old girl. She works for her dad in his freelance organization called COBRA as a bodyguard. She trains hard and shuts everyone out of her world. After her mom’s death years ago, she’s never let anyone else in. 
          
          Her training is complete and her dad sends her off to be the bodyguard to the President’s son. She hasn’t seen him since she was seven, and like any jerk, he used to torment her with petty little tricks. But now she’s back and she’s stronger, faster, better.
          
          Yet he still has the inexplicable ability to make her feel like the weak little girl she used to be. Could he be the one to break her invisible wall?
          
          Welcome to her world of fists, politicians, assassins, high school, and even possible romance.

pop_that_zit101

Hi! I was wondering if you could read my story, and then tell me what you think? It's called Confessions of a Teenage Rebel. Here's a little summary that I wrote of it...............................................
          
          For Annabelle, having somebody so completely infatuated with her is beyond weird. When she starts getting weird pictures of her, and gifts left for her in her room, she figures that there are three possible suspects. Her best friend, Josh, who always seems to be there for her, but is always gone the night that weird things happen. Ethan, the boy she hates because of her parents, who knows just enough to even be considered. And then there’s Matt, the cute football player she flirts with at school. When all hell breaks loose, she finds herself accusing everybody, and losing friends in the process, just when she needs them most. She finds herself in such a deep, binding situation, not knowing the truth, and fearing it. But what happens when nobody is there to protect her? And what happens when she finds out the truth, and that it was somebody she never, ever expected?
          
          Ha, it may sound a but corny, but whatever. That was the best I could do! Hope you check it out (: